The Dead Inside – Excerpt and Giveaway!

So you know I usually post reviews on here, but I was invited to invite YOU to read an excerpt of the new book, The Dead Inside, by Cyndy Etler. Here’s the spooky cover for y’all to check out! 

The Cover:

Here’s a little about the book, too:

For readers of Girl Interrupted and Tweak, Cyndy Etler’s gripping memoir gives readers a glimpse into the harrowing reality of her sixteen months in the notorious “tough love” program the ACLU called “a concentration camp for throwaway kids.”

All Cyndy wanted was to be loved and accepted. By age fourteen, she had escaped from her violent home, only to be reported as a runaway and sent to a “drug rehabilitation” facility that changed her world.

To the public, Straight Inc. was a place of recovery. But behind closed doors, the program used bizarre and intimidating methods to “treat” its patients. In her raw and fearless memoir, Cyndy Etler recounts her sixteen months in the living nightmare that Straight Inc. considered “healing.”

And here’s a little teaser excerpt for everyone to “whet their whistle” with:


You’re not going to believe this. Seriously, nobody does. But this stuff happened, right here in
America. In the warehouse down the street.

The warehouse had a name: Straight, Incorporated. Straight called itself a drug rehab for kids,
but most of us had barely even smoked weed. Take me, for example. In September, at age
thirteen, I smoked it for the first time. I tried smoking again in October. In November, I got
locked up in Straight—for sixteen months. The second we entered the building, we all stopped
being kids. We stopped being humans. Instead, we were Straightlings.

Other than my father and me, each person you read about here has a fake name. Many of the
Straightlings are smooshed-together versions of different people, but everything happened
exactly how I describe it. If you want proof, hit the epilogue. There you’ll find court records,
canceled checks, newspaper reportage, and Straight, Inc. internal documents. Want more proof?
Go online and read all of the survivor stories that are just like mine.

And to my fellow Straightlings? Put your armor on. You’re going back on front row.


Something weird is going on. Something even weirder than the regular daily freak show. I can
feel it. I can hear it. I just can’t see it yet.

Other than Amanda showing up, it’s been a normal day—people singing stupid songs; kids
sharing about their druggie pasts; the teen staff strutting to the barstools like they’re on the red
carpet. But then the side doors open, and all these kids I’ve never seen before come flooding in.
They stand around the edges of group, wedged tight at the shoulder in a human fortress. It’s
creepy and just…wrong.

A half hour later, on some invisible cue, they swarm around us, claw us up from our seats, and
carry us across the group room. The door goons are gone, so they march us right through the
back doors and into this empty room. The walls are bare brick and the carpet is new-jeans blue.
We’re tugged into rows, because with no talking allowed and no chairs, how do we know where
we’re supposed to sit? We should know, though. I can tell by the way my carrier is yanking me
around. She practically tears my belt loop off.

Once we’re all positioned and sitting cross-legged—with the boys’ side so close, if I
whistled, I’d ruffle their bangs—the bad guys show up: Matt King and the mean blond smiler.

“Family rap!” Matt yells.

The people around me start motivating and I do it too, because I don’t want a fucking demon
at my back. Without anyone telling me, I put my arms up and shake them around. And that’s
what gets Matt’s attention. He’s scanning the tightly packed room, and his eyes sear into me.

They look even darker than yesterday.

“Cyyyyndy,” he goes.

The blond staff snaps her head my way. Her smile blinks to life.

“Oh! Y-yeah?” I say back.

My fists are still up by my ears. This isn’t what I was motivating for. I didn’t actually want to
be called on.

“Stand up!” he says, fake friendly.

Everyone’s palms do the upward air shove.

My rubbery legs make it hard to stand. It’s silent except for the rustle of my clothes.

“So…?” Matt says from his barstool.

“What?” I say back. But I say it confused, not snotty.

“What? What. What is that this is family rap. You need to tell us about an incident from your

past, an incident involving your family.”

Four hundred eyes and chins are leveled at me. They make it hard to think.


“Were you a good girl in your past, Cyndy? Were you nice and sweet to your family?”

“Well, they—”

“I’m not asking about them. Were you nice and sweet to your family?”

“Um, no?”

“That’s right, Cyndy! You’re doing great. Now tell us about an incident with your family
where you acted like your druggie self.”

I just stand there. I don’t have a family. I have a mother and a sister and a stepthing who’s the
devil, plus his kids. And “an incident”? I have no idea what I’m supposed to say.


My whole name. He says my whole name. Like he has some…ownership of me.


“We’re waiting!”

“I—I don’t know.”

I might be starting to cry a little.

He’s still staring at me, his eyebrows pointed into sharp little horns.

“I thought I’d give you another chance, Cyndy. But you’ve wasted enough of this group’s
time. Have a seat.”

I can’t sit down fast enough, so I fall instead. My hand catches a girl’s shoulder, but she jerks
it off like she hates me. I feel it, like a heat.

The group starts to yell a “Love ya—” at me, but Matt cuts them off. “No!”

Next the girl who hates me stands up, to share how she made her father beat her. “I remember,
this one time?” she starts out.

That’s Straight code for, Here’s why my parents hate me enough to leave me here.

“I remember saying to my dad, ‘Maybe if you didn’t drink so much, Mom wouldn’t need
therapy.’ I said that to my dad. I ended up in the hospital with a broken arm after that sweet
nothing. And I deserved it, one hundred percent. He fed me and clothed me and kept a roof over
my head, and that’s the thanks I give him? I can’t believe he’ll even still look at me.”

Matt doesn’t just let the group tell her Love ya, he leads it. Before she even sits, he’s all, “

Love ya, Sammie!” so loud it rattles the doorknobs.

At the end of family rap, Lucy tells us what song she wants to hear—one of those ones
from Sunday school. It goes, “They will know we are Straightlings by our love, by our love.

They will knoooow we are Straightlings by our love.”

The next slap of weird comes when they push us back into the never-ending beige of the
group room. The linked chairs are still in rows, but they’ve been turned around to face an ocean

of gray folding chairs. There’s enough seats for all of Communist China. It’s like a chair
warehouse, which, ding! That’s what this place is! It’s a warehouse, literally. It’s a giant storage
locker where, for a fee, parents can disappear their fuckups and rejects.

That’s another reason I’ll be outta here tomorrow. No way does my mother have the money

for this place, when she can barely put five dollars of gas in her car. Twenty-four hours, and I’ll
be on my way back to Jo’s; forty-eight and I’m in Steve’s room. How could their parents not let
me stay with them, when they hear what I’ve been through?

I can feel my Levi’s on my thighs, my denim on my back. Just thinking about Levi’s feels so
good, I barely notice that I’m picking up a dinner tray and getting pushed back to the chairs. In

my mind I’m like, one hundred percent in Levi’s…until the hand in my pants lets go while I’m
still standing.

“Uh?” I kind of grunt, turning my head to the demon behind me.

“Go down the row,” she says. “Sit in that first open seat.”

Feeling like the balloon some little kid let go of, I look down the row, and oh my God! It’s not
the front row! I’m out of the bull’s-eye!

“Thanks,” I say.

I get a mean Shhh! for a reply, but it’s drowned out by this earsplitting SCREECH. Since I’m
standing, I can see what’s going on. But, God. I wish I couldn’t.

It’s Amanda. She’s surrounded by demons, and she’s fighting them all at once. Crouched at
her back is the biggest guy you’ve ever seen. He loops his arms around her from behind, linking

his hands in a hate hug. But even worse is what they’re doing to her arms. Two guys are gripping

her wrists, Jacque style. Matt King style. They’re spreading them like airplane wings, out and down and fast. Tomorrow she’ll have handcuff bruises. She’s telling them she hates them with
animal sounds, not words. I don’t know if I’m more scared for her or for them.

A fist hits my spine, so I move down the row. I’m trying not to hear it all: the screams, the

thwap of flesh on flesh, the shriek of metal as a kicked chair scrapes across the floor. When I get

down to my seat, I can’t help it. I look back at Amanda right as the big guy snaps his hand over

her mouth. He’s—he’s gagging her. Her face is red, and it’s getting redder. Her eyes bulge out,

and she slams her head forward, then back.

There’s a  as her skull hits his, and a shree! as Amanda throws opens her throat. She

head-cracked the gagger. She got his hand off her mouth.

“Gimme my fucking Doc!” she screams.

She rips her bare foot away from the guy who was pinning it; he lunges and tackles her shin.

Other guys are running at her. That’s when I sit down. I sit and pray for somewhere to put my

tray, so I can plug my ears. Amanda’s noises are shredding me. It’s like she knows what she’s
doing, fighting off all these guys. This is why she needs armor clothes. I don’t want to see or
hear or know that it’s happening again.

“Intake room! Sit on ’er!”

It’s our hero, Matt King. He’s striding across the room. He’s calm, he’s casual. He’s happy.

There’s more fleshy struggle sounds, more running feet.

“Group. Look,” Matt says, in a voice you don’t ignore. “This could be you, if you try to run.”

We spin around to watch Amanda, who’s being carried across the room by six guys. She’s a
human casket. She’s got one boot on, and her body’s rippling, trying to shake the boys off her.
And she’s howling.

“Gimme my Doc Marten, you cock-fucking bastards! I’ll kill you! I’ll—”

Another guy runs over and jams a hand over her mouth. His teeth glint through his smile.

In English class, one of Mrs. Skinner’s vocab words was “maxim,” which is a wise little
phrase about life. She gave us this example they use in Japan, to make sure everybody acts the

same as everybody else: “The nail that sticks up gets hammered down.” Amanda is the sticking-up nail. But she’s not smooth and straight, like a regular nail. She’s all knotted up. They can’t
hammer her flat, so they’re killing her instead.

The funeral procession ends as the boys carry Amanda through a door to the left of the

kitchen. It’s a beige door, painted to match the walls, like they don’t want anyone to know it’s

there. The door slams; the group room’s silent. It sounds like the end of the world.

Did that pique your interest? Well…you can win a gift set for the book!

Here’s a link to the Rafflecopter giveaway…but you better enter soon! Only 11 days left! 

A Rafflecopter Giveaway (giveaway hosted by Sourcebooks Fire)

The Author:

Cyndy Etler was homeless at fourteen, summa cum laude at thirty. In her current work as a teacher and teen life coach, Etler happily teaches teens that books work better than drugs. She lives with her husband and dogs in North Carolina. Find her at

Go enter! Otherwise, the book was released April 7, so you can pick up your own copy for $17.99. 

29 thoughts on “The Dead Inside – Excerpt and Giveaway!

  1. Yes. I was asked by Sourcebooks to spread the word, and since I had a nightmare childhood that I plan on writing about (meth and eye patches and helicopters, oh my!), I felt it was good to spread the word on this one.
    I haven’t read it, so I can’t rate it, but it sounds like one hell of a book.

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      1. Very true! The darker the demons, the deeper the stories. I too vent my woes into my books, though I suspect all authors do at some level.

        As for the coffee an chocolate, how do ya feel about a road trip to Virginia?? LOL

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